islands of curmudgeons

posted June 20th, 2008 at 9:21 PM

we pace our own shores,
and smother out distant lights
with our hands.

some people seek external communication,
but we’ve had our fill of

tending to feelings,
treading softly on unknown relationships.
this is an island surrounded by rock
with no lighthouse to warn

passersby who might
die
in pitching and rolling and crashing
waves. torrents of swirling black

that swallow the curious
and never spit them back.

  1. Perfect… ~_^
    i like this one just…..,,,,,,,
    i smell the mix of salt and blood….,,,,

    “that swallow the curious
    and never spit them back.”

    bravo…..

    comment by gerald on 06/27/08 at 11:32 pm

  2. Beautiful.

    comment by Ethan on 07/16/08 at 1:26 am

  3. Justin. I have a weird request of you. Email me, foo’.

    comment by Cass on 07/24/08 at 3:20 pm

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